2007年7月11日水曜日

portfolio

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Writing IIIc: Portfolio
1.0. Essays

1.1. Catalog

Titles of posts with links
Dates
(yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words
Numbers of comments
Example
Restaurant: Star of India
2007.03.13
185
1
1st (introduction)
April (150+ words)

My introduction

2007.04.11
203
0
2nd (campus life)
May (200+ words)

Campus Life

2007.05.28
296
1
3rd (your choice)
June 5 (250+ words)

My favorite

2007.06.04
357
7
4th (Kumamoto)
June 18 (250+ words)

Kumamoto

2007.06.16
272

2
5th (review 1)
July 2 (175+ words)

Movie

2007.07.04
251
4
6th (review 2)
July 16 (200+ words)

CDs

2007.07.13
210
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TOTALS:
1589
16
Note: Calculate totals without the example.

1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.


My best essay is my 3rd essay. It is " my favorite". there are two reasons . First, I could write
357 words. I can't typing so fast. So, This is my best essay, I think. Second, I could use " First" and " second"・・・. These are very important to write essay I think. I want to make more good essay.


2.0. Comments

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Titles of posts with links
Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd)
Numbers of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog

Cherry blossoms @ Ichifusa Reservoir

07.04.11
13 words
too short
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog

Movie

ayan's blog

07.07.04
21 words
I could write my message
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog

My favorite

07.06.06
37 words
good
2.4. Most comments on:
Titles of posts with link
Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) Total number of words in comments
Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays

Campus Life

07.05.28
23 words
good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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07.07.19
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2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?
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24 words
too short
2.4.2. Any of your other posts

Kanijo☆

07.06.08
26 words
good
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?
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07.07.19
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2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? ---
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14 words
too short





* Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Additional reflections on comments:
  • I didn't remember that. But, I think I have to respond to their coments earlier.

3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)

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Number of words
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial
25
07.04.18
3.2. Best typing speed trial
96
07.06.13
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials
70





4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Catalog Titles of posts with links
Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) Number of words Numbers of comments
Example:
Vampire Killer
2007.05.16
39
1
1-01

the gift of the magi

07.04.25
30
0
1-02

The Trial of Tears

07.05.01
53
0
1-03

Mike's lucky day

07.05.25
43
0
1-04

Diana

07.05.26
120
0
1-05

The Last Photo

07.05.28
44
0
1-06

London

07.05.28
40
0
1-07

FOOD AND DRINK IN BRITAIN

07.06.10
45
0
1-08

THE CINEMA

07.06.10
35
0
1-09

kings and Queens of Britain

07.07.04
26
0
1-10

soccer

07.07.04
25
0
1-11

seasons and celebrations

07.07.04
22
0
1-12

rain Forests

07.07.04
32
0








































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TOTALS:
517
0
Note: Calculate totals without the example.

4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.

  • My best book review i s my 4th book review. This story about "Diana". The first reason is That, I like her . She is very beautiful princess and very kind. She was loved by all over the world. second, I think I could introduce this book and about her longer than my other
    book reviews.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation

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Yes
No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar?
yes

5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? yes

5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week? yes

5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar?
yes

5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? yes

5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately): ---
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  • "books" (plural)
yes

  • "essays" (plural)
yes

  • "quickposts" (plural, with no spaces)
yes

5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? yes

  • How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts?
    • 4

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  • Which labels, and how many posts each?
    • Kgks (Kaigaikensyu) (o)
    • kumamoto (0)
    • media (o)
    • movies(0)
    • books (13)
    • essays(9)
    • quickpost(40)
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5.3. Links & media ---
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5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures? yes

  • Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?

no
  • How many of your blog posts include pictures or other graphics?
  • 8
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5.3.2. Posts with multiple links
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  • How many of your posts include three (3) or more links?
    • I don't have links
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5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?
no
  • How many of your blog posts include other media?
    • I don't have any media.
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5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?

I want to put many pictures on my blog. I think that, if there are more pictures, It seems become more interesting blog.

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:
  • I can't write well,yet. My writing is not so good, I think.But, I tried to make good blog and good essays. In my essays, I tried to write as lon as I could possible. To typing English is very dificult. But , I want to typing more fast than now.


7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
  • Their blogs are very interesting, I think. My glog has not so many pictures. But, Thir glog s are very colorful and unique. I want to make more good blog like their.






6 件のコメント:

moe さんのコメント...

Hi, Chiho.
I think you could write this very well. I learned how to write from your portfolio. Thank you, Chiho.

Ayano さんのコメント...

Hi! I'm ayano. Your portfolio is so good. Please teach me how to portfolio.

mikuu さんのコメント...

Hi, I'm Miku.
I looked your portfolio. Your portfolio is very nice. I want to do your portfolio.

miki さんのコメント...

Hi! I'm Miki. Your portfolio is very beautiful. Also, your essay and book review is long. It is good things!

chiporin さんのコメント...

Hi moe.thank you that you said me such a thing. I read your portfolio. And I comment on your blog.


Hi pon!
I read your blog and portfolio.

Triphaina さんのコメント...

Hi! I enjoyed when I watched your blog. Your blog is perfect and great.