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Writing IIIc: Portfolio1.1. Catalog | Titles of posts with links | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words | Numbers of comments |
Example | Restaurant: Star of India | 2007.03.13 | 185 | 1 |
1st (introduction) April (150+ words) | My introduction | 2007.04.11 | 203 | 0 |
2nd (campus life) May (200+ words) | Campus Life | 2007.05.28 | 296 | 1 |
3rd (your choice) June 5 (250+ words) | My favorite | 2007.06.04 | 357 | 7 |
4th (Kumamoto) June 18 (250+ words) | Kumamoto | 2007.06.16 | 272 | 2 |
5th (review 1) July 2 (175+ words) | Movie | 2007.07.04 | 251 | 4 |
6th (review 2) July 16 (200+ words) | CDs | 2007.07.13 | 210 | 2 |
--- | --- | TOTALS: | 1589 | 16 |
1.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.
My best essay is my 3rd essay. It is " my favorite". there are two reasons . First, I could write
357 words. I can't typing so fast. So, This is my best essay, I think. Second, I could use " First" and " second"・・・. These are very important to write essay I think. I want to make more good essay.
2.0. Comments
--- | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yyyy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments* |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog | Cherry blossoms @ Ichifusa Reservoir | 07.04.11 | 13 words | too short |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog | Movieayan's blog | 07.07.04 | 21 words | I could write my message |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog | My favorite | 07.06.06 | 37 words | good |
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yyyy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments* |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays | Campus Life | 07.05.28 | 23 words | good |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 07.07.19 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 24 words | too short |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts | Kanijo☆ | 07.06.08 | 26 words | good |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 07.07.19 | --- | --- |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 14 words | too short |
2.5. Additional reflections on comments:
- I didn't remember that. But, I think I have to respond to their coments earlier.
3.0. Typing Speed Trials (5 mins.)
--- | Number of words | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) |
3.1. Worst typing speed trial | 25 | 07.04.18 |
3.2. Best typing speed trial | 96 | 07.06.13 |
3.3. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials | 70 | |
4.0. Book Reviews
4.1. Catalog | Titles of posts with links | Dates (yyyy.mm.dd) | Number of words | Numbers of comments |
Example: | Vampire Killer | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
1-01 | the gift of the magi | 07.04.25 | 30 | 0 |
1-02 | The Trial of Tears | 07.05.01 | 53 | 0 |
1-03 | Mike's lucky day | 07.05.25 | 43 | 0 |
1-04 | Diana | 07.05.26 | 120 | 0 |
1-05 | The Last Photo | 07.05.28 | 44 | 0 |
1-06 | London | 07.05.28 | 40 | 0 |
1-07 | FOOD AND DRINK IN BRITAIN | 07.06.10 | 45 | 0 |
1-08 | THE CINEMA | 07.06.10 | 35 | 0 |
1-09 | kings and Queens of Britain | 07.07.04 | 26 | 0 |
1-10 | soccer | 07.07.04 | 25 | 0 |
1-11 | seasons and celebrations | 07.07.04 | 22 | 0 |
1-12 | rain Forests | 07.07.04 | 32 | 0 |
--- | --- | TOTALS: | 517 | 0 |
4.2. Selection and assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons.
- My best book review i s my 4th book review. This story about "Diana". The first reason is That, I like her . She is very beautiful princess and very kind. She was loved by all over the world. second, I think I could introduce this book and about her longer than my other
book reviews.
5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking & Media Presentation
--- | Yes | No |
5.1. Does your blog have an archive in the sidebar? | yes | |
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | yes | |
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by week? | yes | |
5.1.3. Is the archive at the top of the sidebar? | yes | |
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | yes | |
5.2.1. Do your labels include each of these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
| yes | |
| yes | |
| yes | |
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | yes | |
| --- | |
| --- | --- |
5.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures? | yes | |
| no | |
| --- | --- |
5.3.2. Posts with multiple links | --- | --- |
| --- | --- |
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | no | |
| --- | --- |
5.4. What would you most like to do to enhance the overall presentation of your blog?
I want to put many pictures on my blog. I think that, if there are more pictures, It seems become more interesting blog.
6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing:
- I can't write well,yet. My writing is not so good, I think.But, I tried to make good blog and good essays. In my essays, I tried to write as lon as I could possible. To typing English is very dificult. But , I want to typing more fast than now.
7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- Their blogs are very interesting, I think. My glog has not so many pictures. But, Thir glog s are very colorful and unique. I want to make more good blog like their.
6 件のコメント:
Hi, Chiho.
I think you could write this very well. I learned how to write from your portfolio. Thank you, Chiho.
Hi! I'm ayano. Your portfolio is so good. Please teach me how to portfolio.
Hi, I'm Miku.
I looked your portfolio. Your portfolio is very nice. I want to do your portfolio.
Hi! I'm Miki. Your portfolio is very beautiful. Also, your essay and book review is long. It is good things!
Hi moe.thank you that you said me such a thing. I read your portfolio. And I comment on your blog.
Hi pon!
I read your blog and portfolio.
Hi! I enjoyed when I watched your blog. Your blog is perfect and great.
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